Good day Miss Judy
Indeed, when midnight stroke, a lot of thoughts wander
Your brain, whether it is good or bad.
I will move now to talk about your poem:
*All my analysis depending upon the word 'ever' and what exactly
You meant by it, whether you meant 'Never' or 'Always' and let's
Start with the former, and consider it as 'Never wearied me'
What I have did first was to divide your poem into two halves,
But frankly what puzzled me, was the contradiction between
The two parts; Let me explain more:
When you mentioned the memory which you remembered, and its
Effects Upon your condition that night, in these connected lines:
'That memory... 'Never weird me'
Turned that gloomy silence
into chilling sounds'
Here, we find that this memory looks like optimist one, there is
A kind of relaxation in your words, and you did not make me
Feel as if you were suffering from this memory or as if you
Remembered something calls sadness.
The second point, what was your black burden?
The contradiction is the connection between the black burden and
That Summer night memory.
I think there is no connection between the two, especially when
The Memory did not trouble you.
And this is if you meant 'Never wearied me'
* If it was 'Always wearied me', here it will
be a totally different Story:
There will be a connection between both points since you have
A bad memory and this bad memory is the same as black burden.
And it is always aching your head and wearied you.
Finally, I will go in further discussion in this after I see
How you will connect these two points, and what you meant
In the play on word 'Ever'
My field Mate, I wish you the best of Luck.
A Memory At Night
بحبك يا شـــام ! 