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.Day Machine


SILVER

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Day Machine

09-05-2008 08:41 PM




'Day Machine'


Morning is evening
And evening is twenty-four hours.
Those hours are morning,
The same as evening,
The evening of mind
When it is surrounded by clouds
Passing hasty
With no consideration
To the next morning,
The morning of mind
When it is ultimately unclouded
Passing reasonably
With a witty technique
For the next evening,


(Copyrights © SILVER)
2008-05-08
Free verse







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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

10-05-2008 02:00 PM




My God !!!! what a poem
let me be honest
whenever I want to read one of your poems
I need to disconnect my internet and read it very slowly
to be able first to understand it
second to comment on it
because they are getting more and more difficult
( this is something good by the way don't get me wrong)
or maybe I am getting dumber hhhhhhhhh
just joking
and by the way I like when the poem challenges you to understand it
those poems are unforgetable

thanks a million




You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made

.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



  بحبك يا شـــام


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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

10-05-2008 03:21 PM




Hello Ms Judy

It's My pleasure to see you as the First Man who Participate

In this Poem.

For Me, again I never get your words wrong, so fear Nothing.

Enough to say this up-till Now, for of waiting your next replay

That contains what have you Understood from this poem, But

Without losing control in your Studying.

Best of Luck





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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

10-05-2008 07:32 PM




wait wait wait SILVER…
Sorry .. firstly good evening
Secondly what kind of maze is this ?
SILVER you can write whatever you like but don't you see that we have the right to understand your riddles…!!!
All my salutation to YOU…





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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

10-05-2008 10:38 PM




Good Morning

Unfortunately Safaa you do not have the right,

because this is Not A riddle, or a kind of joke,

I think they call it A Poem.

Let the worn thoughts Steams out of your mind,

And replace it by one thing:

My Poems are Not A tenny-penny.

Excuse My words only if I misused your Point.

In both ways, Thanks for your Reply.

Best of Luck



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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

11-05-2008 11:20 AM




Hello again Silver

First, I liked the title very much
because it helped more to get the idea
of the poem
and it is a very much well-chosen title

Second, this is my understanding of the poem

How the morning passes in a boring manner
to give the evening his way
to intensify the dull rythem of every hour
through which we humans unconsciously sway

and live the day waiting for the next 
searching for a time in which we can rest

a rest of mind is the one I mean
to forget all about day machine


I hope you like it
Regards




You just walked out of one of my dreams
So beautiful, you're leaving me breathless

And if our love was a story book
We would meet on the very first page
The last chapter would be about
How I'm thankful for the life we've made

.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..



  بحبك يا شـــام


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SafSaf

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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

11-05-2008 02:29 PM




Hi SILVER… it's  clear that unfortunately you've misunderstood me...
SILVER..do I really have worn thoughts??
I told you once that you always haste..
anyway ..you should know that I didn't underestimate  your (poem) no at all
{معاذ الله}
and when I depict it as a riddle I meant exactly what I said ..
and I want to ask you a question I hope you to answer : does the word (riddle) look like (joke)??? I think no it doesn't…
I told you also that I like your poems because they have a kind of confusion and I enjoy analyzing them..
All what I wanted to say that this poem was difficult a little bit and it needs some footnote that help readers getting the exact idea
SILVER…your reply was very harsh ..I didn't expect it at all ..anyway you can't say whatever you want then end:

Excuse My words only if I misused your Point



ALL my salutation to YOU
..





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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

12-05-2008 09:06 AM




Good evening

Thank you Judy for sharing again,

Somehow there is something true from what you've said.

We live the day waiting for the next, But we are Not

Waiting without any motion.

We must have something to do while we are waiting,

Like thinking and taking crucial decisions.

Thanks again Judy.

I Hope that you liked the poem.

Best wishes





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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

12-05-2008 09:40 AM




Good evening Dear Safaa

I'm sorry that I have took long time to replay you

In 'Day Machine', but unfortunately; yesternight

I was so ill, and even I couldn't be able to understand

What you've wrote.

For now, I'll replay you in proper way.

But I have a question before if you do not mind:

Do you think that I'm hasty person?!!

Here are the answers of some of your questions:

*- Do I really have worn thoughts?

In general your mind is clean, and I respect your views,

Do not misinterpret my words.

*- Does the word riddle looks like a joke?

For me, some riddles are a kind of joke.

*- Your poem needs footnotes.

In fact, we can put footnotes if there were any difficult

Words in the piece to make it easier, but in 'Day Machine'

I can not see any difficult words, it is right that the meaning

Is somehow occult, but believe me I can not put an

Interpretation because if I want to interpret it,

it will not be a poem.

I hope that you will understand what I'm saying.

*- Your replay was very harsh.

As I said, excuse me if I misused your words.

I'll Not comment on the poem now, for of waiting

What you have got from the meaning.

Thank you again





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رد مشاركة : Day Machine

12-05-2008 11:53 AM




Hello SILVER..
firstly… I wish you a quick recovery..
secondly… I want to attract your respectable attention to something important:
riddles are very complicated and need very high intelligence to be solved , and only the clever and skillful personS can solve them..
thirdly.. ..sometimes you have a poem with very clear and simple words but you can't take it as it is because you have to read in between the lines in order to approach the implicit meaning...
forthly ..when we study poetry (Arabic or English) we're given data and references that enable us to get the full and exact meaning ..because we can't interpret the poem in a way that we see because it will be a mono-point of view and the poem won't go in the way that the poet want it and write it for..(and as I see the poet write his feeling  and express himself letting the others share him his views… else why he or she publish his writing??)
I know that every one has his thoughts and read differently from the other but at the end when we have for example a poem such as you can't  come in the exam and interpret as you like because there are circumstances and events that pushed the poet to write what he wrote and hence there are certain meanings that the poet intended  …
Fifthly I'm afraid it will turn to an essay      ;; ; so I'll stop here and so sorry for length and disturbing …
      All MY salutation to YOU ..





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